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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that in this case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

First of all, it is important to mention that we have a lot of various views on this topic. On the one hand, some people believe that to be successful in school means to be victorious in their life and work, in particular. Whereas, on the other hand, another part of society feels that it works in an absolutely different way. We will try to observe both sides of this question.

It is not a secret that we all want to be as valuable as possible for our friends and family, for our boss, our country and for our generation, in general. From my point of view, we have real difficulty with understanding what things matter and what we need to learn to be effectively successful. It is not a secret that in our country we mainly train hard skills. In this way, we know several science subjects totally well but, actually, we do not know what we can do with this knowledge and as a result, these abilities are unhelpful in a real life.

It seems to me that it will be a great idea to train more skills which will be helpful in the real world. Thus, I believe that it is quite valuable to realize your strengths and weaknesses and the methods of how you can improve them. Consequently, I am totally sure that soft skills are the most important field to work on in relation to taking one of the major roles in our society.

In conclusion, I want to emphasize that knowledge like how to deal with people, make decisions and manage your time are the most valuable because they are a basis for your achievements in the future.






Автор: Маркіян Т.

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